Black pond
Exhales
Midges
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Not getting to blogging or blog reading much at the moment. I miss it. I miss reading your haiku.
This is lovely - that 'exhales' is perfect. It's got that sense of heat, and airlessness.
Posted by: jem | 28 June 2009 at 11:43 AM