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22 July 2010
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I love this entirely new way of expressing the sense of anticipation before a storm.
Posted by: Melissa Allen | 27 July 2010 at 05:31 PM
I love this image...seeing it in my mind...I wish to see it with my eyes. Thanks, peace,
Diane
Posted by: D.M. Solis | 31 July 2010 at 01:56 PM
Those neatly folded storms that are anything but once they are on top of us. ;-) I love your line!
Alan
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Posted by: Alan Summers | 29 August 2010 at 01:04 AM
brilliant haiku Brian
Posted by: Dave Serjeant | 09 September 2010 at 01:33 PM